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The butcher, the innkeeper and the huntsman. act 1:- read read the description -:The butcher, the innkeeper and the huntsman. act 1 by Orhblin
Aye I lived there. It used to be a quiet town y'know. I worked at the local slaughterhouse; it was a fair paying job. It al started out like any other day, I had gotten meh hands on one them BIG ol' fit smelly pig, a real' swine I tell ya. People were crazy for getting their hands on it. I suppose the entire town came to meh home that morning HAH. I sold him to our local innkeeper, a fine man; he used to keep em' snukly strangers out of town. We don't want them pest to disturb our great peace. Though I always wondered how he kept business running when he rejected all the outsiders. But he was a man to be respected.
Later that day my working hunter came into meh empty store. He was a strong young lad, capable of pullin' his own weight. About to hit his 20's I guess. He came in shouting at me, telling that he hadn't gottn' his fair share of the pigs payoff. Foolish lad, when life gives you an opportunity ya gotta take it. and that's why I lowered his payme
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